The story makes sense, it’s more of a description than a story at parts but that’s okay. Overall I think it’s a good idea. I think it’s a really cool way to capture your experience. I think the best photo is the one of Malena at the docks, I love the simplicity and the dock rails act as really good leading lines. One not so good is the one where she looks happy because it’s not in focus. Improvement would be maybe pick a different picture.
The story makes sense, it’s more of a description than a story at parts but that’s okay. Overall I think it’s a good idea. I think it’s a really cool way to capture your experience. I think the best photo is the one of Malena at the docks, I love the simplicity and the dock rails act as really good leading lines. One not so good is the one where she looks happy because it’s not in focus. Improvement would be maybe pick a different picture.
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